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ECHOED DIMENSIONS
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CHARACTER
CHARACTER 1 (YC1) –
YOUNGER
CHARACTER 2 (OC2) -
OLDER
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STAGE DIRECTIONS
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DIALOGUE
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SCENE 1- INTRO
OC2-
YC1-
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Staring past camera, blank faced
Wakes shocked in alley
Sits up and looks around
Stands and heads down alley,
walks into darkness
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Heavy breathing- no speech
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SCENE 2- GIRL ENTERS ROOM
OC2-
YC1-
OC2-
YC1-
OC2-
YC1-
OC2-
YC1-
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Sat in chair staring at the
window on the opposite side of the room to her.
Enters room, see’s woman in
chair. Sudden jolt of fright. Tries to exit but door is locked shut now.
Turns, holds a moment then moves forward towards the woman.
Holds the stare
Walks towards center of room
Begins to shake slightly,
continues to stare through girl.
Leans into the woman, almost
breaking personal space.
Eye line changes, moves from
looking past girl to staring directly into her eyes.
Steps back from woman, turns
around, and sees window, stares in confusion, similar to woman’s facial expression.
(forward over shoulder shot with a pull focus to see both faces)
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Hello? Who are you, please help
me, I, I don’t know where I am.
Indefinable mumbling
Are you ok?
*slightly agitated tone* listen I don’t know what this, but please
I’m scared and confused, how do I get out of here?
*Whisper, barely understandable*
the window.
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SCENE 3- DISCOVERING THE CURTAIN
(BUILD UP)
YC1-
OC2-
YC1-
OC2-
OC2-
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Gradually moves towards the
curtain, then turns back to woman.
Staring back at the window
again.
Moves to curtain, hands shaking
grabs hold of both side of curtain and opens quickly. Steps back in amazement
and shock, looks up, holds glare, looks back down again directly into camera
(window)
Quickly spins and shouts
Shacking uncontrollably
Jumps out of chair towards girl.
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W-Whats behind the curtain?
silence
What kind of sick joke is this?!
Mumbling again.
Sharp breath.
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SCENE 4- CLIMAX
OC2-
YC1-
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Standing infront of YC1 (who has
her back to the window)
Grabs hold of YC1 and said with
a soft, calm tone
Pushes YC1 through window
Falls back through window.
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Im sorry but its our only way
out. You’ll forgive us one day.
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*AGING MONTAGE*
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YC1-
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Now a slightly aged version of
the younger character, sat in the exact same position as OC2, showing how
eventually the younger character will become the older one and the entire
situation will repeat.
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Heavy breathing
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Friday, 16 October 2015
SCRIPT
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