Friday, 16 October 2015

SCRIPT


ECHOED DIMENSIONS
CHARACTER
CHARACTER 1 (YC1) – YOUNGER
CHARACTER 2 (OC2) - OLDER
STAGE DIRECTIONS


DIALOGUE
SCENE 1-   INTRO
       OC2-


YC1-

Staring past camera, blank faced

Wakes shocked in alley
Sits up and looks around
Stands and heads down alley, walks into darkness




Heavy breathing- no speech
SCENE 2- GIRL ENTERS ROOM
OC2-




YC1-








OC2-

YC1-


OC2-



YC1-






OC2-






YC1-


Sat in chair staring at the window on the opposite side of the room to her.

Enters room, see’s woman in chair. Sudden jolt of fright. Tries to exit but door is locked shut now. Turns, holds a moment then moves forward towards the woman.

Holds the stare

Walks towards center of room

Begins to shake slightly, continues to stare through girl.

Leans into the woman, almost breaking personal space.




Eye line changes, moves from looking past girl to staring directly into her eyes.


Steps back from woman, turns around, and sees window, stares in confusion, similar to woman’s facial expression. (forward over shoulder shot with a pull focus to see both faces)







Hello? Who are you, please help me, I, I don’t know where I am.






Indefinable mumbling

Are you ok?






*slightly agitated tone*   listen I don’t know what this, but please I’m scared and confused, how do I get out of here?

*Whisper, barely understandable* the window.
SCENE 3- DISCOVERING THE CURTAIN (BUILD UP)
YC1-




OC2-


YC1-












OC2-


OC2-



Gradually moves towards the curtain, then turns back to woman.

Staring back at the window again.

Moves to curtain, hands shaking grabs hold of both side of curtain and opens quickly. Steps back in amazement and shock, looks up, holds glare, looks back down again directly into camera (window)
Quickly spins and shouts

Shacking uncontrollably

Jumps out of chair towards girl.


W-Whats behind the curtain?



silence












What kind of sick joke is this?!

Mumbling again.


Sharp breath.
SCENE 4- CLIMAX
OC2-










YC1-

Standing infront of YC1 (who has her back to the window)

Grabs hold of YC1 and said with a soft, calm tone
Pushes YC1 through window


Falls back through window.






Im sorry but its our only way out. You’ll forgive us one day.







*AGING MONTAGE*
YC1-
Now a slightly aged version of the younger character, sat in the exact same position as OC2, showing how eventually the younger character will become the older one and the entire situation will repeat.
Heavy breathing

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